lunes, 11 de octubre de 2010

My baby Zoé

Do you have a treasure? Do you love someone a lot?, if your answer is yes, now I have to ask why?. Well, I am going to tell you that I have someone who I love so much, she is my daughter who is also my treasure, but she has characteristics that make her be unique and special for me.
The first one is her physical appearance. She is beautiful, she has short-black-hair, big-brown-eyes, she is a little bit fat, she has a flat nose, she is chubby-cheeked, she has a very small mouth, and she is white. Most of these characteristics are similar to the characteristics of her father. Such as the hair, eyes, the nose, even the gestures of her face, since she makes a lot of gestures that her dad makes; in other words, she is very similar to him, but she is beautiful any way.
The way that she behaves make her be special, since she is very lovely with me; she likes to play with me and also to sleep next to me, because she always tries to sleep getting my blouse, my hair or my hand. When she is with my parents, she started laughing, and she shouts of happiness. Even though she looks like a quite girl, she is also a quick-tempered baby, because she becomes angry when all of us are busy and no one is paying attention to her. Moreover, she starts crying when she feels alone and when she gets desperate. In addition, when she feels angry, she starts making strange sounds.
Her movements and mischieves are other beautiful characteristic, since she is discovering, and learning many things. Usually everything is clean or does not. Moreover, when she listens to any kind of sound or music, she starts dancing and she gave us a beautiful smile. When I am sleeping and she is next to me she hits my ace until I wake up, and when I open my eyes, she smiles. In addition, she loves to eat cookies, so when I am eating cookies she snatches the cookie. Also when she wants to reach something she tries to go where that thing is and when she cannot do it, she starts to make a rage. Finally, she loves to be held, she hates the cradle.
Because all of these reasons are why I love my daughter, she is special and she also makes me feel that I am special. She is my treasure. The most precious that someone would like to have. All of these things you can experiment with these special angels, and I hope you as me have a treasure or someone who loves at home.

2 comentarios:

  1. Hi Jessie, I can tell that there are a lot of emotions put together in your essay. You did a good job in transmiting those emotions to the reader and I think I got a good picture of your baby without knowing her. Good work in general.

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  2. ey jessi.. you described very well your feelings...i liked all that you wrote about your baby, it is very clear..

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