Many people around the world need to start using electronic tools, due to the necessity to be communicated or for business, school, to have fun, etc… . In my personal case I had to start to use electronic tools due to the school, the necessity of being communicated, and for having fun.
School is the first and the very important reason to use electronic tools. Due to the necessity of investigate information, upload homework, and many more; I had to learn how to use electronic tools in order to have a better academic development at school. It was kind of difficult, because I am not good at using technology, and even I have about 5 years using it, sometimes I need help. Moreover electronic literacy is very useful to find whatever kind of information, since the easier information until the most difficult. In addition it is helpful for me as a student to check my grades, my schedule, and other important things in the school.
Another important aspect that I took into consideration to use electronic tools is communication. Since I have relatives and friends who live in other states or in United States; I need to keep in touch with them by chat, mail, or social WebPages, this is less expensive than a phone call. Moreover through this media I can know more people from different country and know about different cultures and languages, which can be useful for my career and my general learning.
Electronic literacy is useful for having fun, since when I do not have something important to do I usually resort to it, in order to waste my time or to calm my curiosity to learn something strange. I think there are no better tools to waste the time instead of electronic tools, because they offer a lot of room chats, mail, social WebPages, game pages, searchers, and many more. Also communicate is another way to have fun, and electronic tools can help you with that.
As a conclusion electronic literacy have became important in our everyday life, and it helps us to cover some necessities such as communication, studying, business, having fun, and many more…. And as I am part of the society and I have to be updated, and obviously covering some necessities.
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ResponderEliminarIn the third essay Jessie you wrote this "I can know more people from different country" you tried to mean countries right? so you just need to change country for countries.
Another part was this "which can be useful for my career and my general learning." it is useful for your major, not your career. Your career would be at the moment of your graduation, but nowadays it is your major.
In the second to last essay you wrote "in order to waste my time or to calm my curiosity" i recommend you to change waste to spend. After that sentence you also used waste, so change it :)
"they offer a lot of room chats" what is wrong in it? You make two mistakes there, figure them out, they are easy to recognize : )
"Also communicate is another way to have fun" you tried to express the noun, didn't you?
"As a conclusion electronic literacy have became" Remember the irregular verbs mi.
Your essay was very good and clear, but be aware of the size of your paragraphs, the second one is huge compared to the first and the last paragraph.
hi jessy...well I like your essay, it is good and very clear but there are some details that I think you need to change for example I think that on the third paragraph...." I can know more people from different country and know about different cultures and languages, which can be useful for my career and my general learning..." You can write "I can meet more people from different countries and know more about different cultures and languages, which can be useful for my major and my general learning.."...on the others paragraphs I agree with carlos if you change these little mistakes your essay would be better...
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